Gender Studies I know this is a very rough draft. I really have no idea how to connect my essay to the points my instructor indicates. We have to use the terms (which is attached) in our essay and connect them to our points and how those shape the person I am right now. There is also a paper guideline (attached) which was gave by my instructor, and we have to follow her guideline. There is one response (attached) from my instructor after she read my first paragraph. I made a few changes on it, but still struggling. Please rewrite it based on the draft I have right now, for the other, you can just make it up for me.