demonstrating your clear understanding and critical and creative engagement with works, ideas, critical concepts, various contexts, and interpretation of art between 1945 and today. For this topic, you just write something about body art. you have yo give a specific example. Do not to summarize the work. This is a feedback about last Journal: As for feedback I will echo what I said to everyone in tutorial about writing a clear topic sentence, picking a specific topic (ie not a summary) and editing. Your writing was very confusing and hard to follow. It may be useful to seek help from the UTM writing centre. Furthermore, you need to make sure that you fact check the things that you write in your journal, it can’t be a stream of consciousness.